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creative writing workshop: critiques
what i liked about the fiction:- she had a good idea and nice flow of story line.
- the words that she uses is simple and understandable.
- the language that she is understandable.
- there is a suspension in her fiction where she tries to deliver.
- good quality of writing which impressed me.
what i would her to improve on :- certain words that she uses doesn't make sense in some of the sentences.she can use some other words other than that to replace it.
- she brings out new line of idea when she didn't even state the reason for the first incident.
- even when there is a suspension in her fiction but i couldn't get what she is trying to say because she break into another suspension while explaining the first suspension.
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